This morning we continued with our work on short stories.

Yesterday we read some of the work that the children have posted on the Moodle and annotated it, looking for ways in which we could improve each story.

Today we thought about how we could improve these stories.

We decided that every story needs a good opening, adventurous vocabulary, good characters and interesting descriptions.

In a carousel activity we had to think of one of each of the above, and write them down.

We then shared our ideas with the class and discussed our choices.

We will use these ideas to help us when we write our stories.